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My eyes they are not weary
Of looking upon you.
Six months is what we’ve had
Our love remains so true.

Experience hath given me
The way that I view thee.
So kind and loving, the way you are
The marvellous Katie.

To me you are just awesome
So very talented.
Capable of anything
From God you are gifted.

Honesty a strong point
In your gracious heart.
A model of exemplary
Your life one piece of art.

Your beauty and your elegance
You radiate the sky.
To hold you close and kiss you now
I am a lucky guy.

So smart and wise beyond your years
Tis such a valuable skill.
For life may throw us pain and hurt
But your dreams you will fulfil.

There’s nothing false about your life
You’re natural all the way.
Exquisite in your every move
You brighten up my day.

For I am blessed to play a part
In such a passionate love.
For God has brought us two together
He’s smiling from above.

My love for you has grown and grown
Since we have been together
For true love is eternal
And will last forever.
©2008-2009 ~Soldier-of-Light
:iconsoldier-of-light:

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This is the poem I wrote to my beautiful girlfriend for our 6 month anniversary :) :heart: I love you so much.

tell me what you think. :)

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:iconliving-on-a-cloud:
I love you :heart:
It's been an awesome 6 months, has it not?

I read it and I was just like, aww! :aww:

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Walk behind me and I may not lead.
Walk in front and I may not follow.
Just walk beside me and be my friend.
:iconsoldier-of-light:
I love you too :heart:
yes it has been the best 6 months of my life

I wrote it and I was like aww I hope she likes it :D

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The best confidence builder is experience
:iconliving-on-a-cloud:
Course I like it :aww:

I'd put it on the back seat with the thought that it could wait till another time because I wasn't going to read it on the way down to Noarlunga. So when I got the camera I saw it on the back seat and decided to read it then. I was like aww, that's so awesome! :aww:

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Walk behind me and I may not lead.
Walk in front and I may not follow.
Just walk beside me and be my friend.
:iconsoldier-of-light:
yay :heart: thanks for the fav too :)
I love you so much :heart:

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The best confidence builder is experience
:iconrajia:
Aww, that's so sweet. :)
:iconsoldier-of-light:
thank you :)

it was our 6 month anniversary yesterday :D

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The best confidence builder is experience
:iconrajia:
You're welcome!
Aww, did you celebrate with anything else? :aww:
:iconsoldier-of-light:
with anyone else??? could you rephrase that?
=P

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The best confidence builder is experience
:iconliving-on-a-cloud:
you're very welcome :heart:
I love you too

--
Walk behind me and I may not lead.
Walk in front and I may not follow.
Just walk beside me and be my friend.

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